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I'm awful at critiques but here goes:
A nice, simple scene. The background doesn't bother at all and the lighting is good too. Maybe just a tad too much light in a few places like Fluttershy's mane. The pose was humanized flawlessly. Although the one thing that bothers me a bit is the composition- the way Pinkie get's cut out. Maybe it's meant to go with they dynamic pose but something is still a slight miss. You did the clothes very well though. Both in design (a lot of other artists go over-the-top with mlp clothes <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>) and how the fabric folds/ follows the movement.
Technically I can't say much about originality since this is a commission and a scene from the show. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="234" title="Shrug"/>
Good job in general <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I don't give critiques out for everyone, only a few drawings that I have a lot to say about <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/>